Kia Ora! My name is Maddiosn I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! Awesome concept I love how you added in an image also know as DLO! ( If you don't know DLO means Digital Learning Object). I also like your title! I find it hard sometimes to do those.
I think that one way you could improve on is to ask questions and write more about your work to give the reader a better understanding of your blog. Like maybe why your posting it? Or how you made it?
Hi! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
I love the focus of this blog post! The image is cool too! I don't know if you made it, but it's still really cool!
I don't know why, but I just really like words that make up pictures. It's a simple, yet creative thing that you can do.
Perhaps you could give us more information about your blog. Like Maddie said, ask questions, maybe tell them how you're posting it or how you made it. Don't forget to make it colourful and attention drawing!
Wow!! I really liked the word image that you made. It looks so cool. I really like it. Which website did you use? Or did you just made it using google drawing?
Maybe next time you could add more text. Make a connection with the reader. A cool ending would be really cool.
I really like the work art that you made. It looks hard to make, you could add some more word next time. I like how you made it what website did you use to make it. Bye, Peter
Kia Ora! My name is Maddiosn I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWOW!
Awesome concept I love how you added in an image also know as DLO! ( If you don't know DLO means Digital Learning Object).
I also like your title! I find it hard sometimes to do those.
I think that one way you could improve on is to ask questions and write more about your work to give the reader a better understanding of your blog. Like maybe why your posting it? Or how you made it?
Awesome work!
-Maddie
Hi! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteI love the focus of this blog post! The image is cool too! I don't know if you made it, but it's still really cool!
I don't know why, but I just really like words that make up pictures. It's a simple, yet creative thing that you can do.
Perhaps you could give us more information about your blog. Like Maddie said, ask questions, maybe tell them how you're posting it or how you made it. Don't forget to make it colourful and attention drawing!
Keep up the excellent work!
- Hana
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ReplyDeleteHello Leitupo,
ReplyDeleteI am Albin from YMS.
Wow!! I really liked the word image that you made. It looks so cool. I really like it. Which website did you use? Or did you just made it using google drawing?
Maybe next time you could add more text. Make a connection with the reader. A cool ending would be really cool.
Kind regards,
Albin
Hello Leitupo,
ReplyDeleteI am Peter
I really like the work art that you made. It looks hard to make, you could add some more word next time. I like how you made it what website did you use to make it.
Bye,
Peter
Hello Peter
ReplyDeletethe website is called word art